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mea si a unui receptor cu lacat...

Made with:Z e n i t 11
K o d a k film color 200

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for : :iconmishka-sun:

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"Now that I've lost everything to you,
you say you want to start something new,
and it's breaking my heart you're leaving,
baby I'm grieving.

But if you wanna leave take good care,
hope you have a lot of nice things to wear,
but then a lot of nice things turn bad out there.

Oh baby baby it's a wild world,
it's hard to get by just upon a smile.
Oh baby baby it's a wild world.

I'll always remember you like a child, girl.
You know I've seen a lot of what the world can do,
and it's breaking my heart in two,
cause I never want to see you sad girl,
don't be a bad girl,
but if you want to leave take good care,
hope you make a lot of nice friends out there,
but just remember there's a lot of bad and beware,
beware,

Oh baby baby it's a wild world,
it's hard to get by just upon a smile
Oh baby baby it's a wild world,
and I'll always remember you like a child, girl.

Baby I love you, but if you wanna leave take good care,
hope you make a lot of nice friends out there,
but just remember there's a lot of bad,
and beware, beware,

oh baby baby it's a wild world,
it's hard to get by just upon a smile.
Oh baby baby it's a wild world,
and I'll always remember you like a child, girl.
"



Cat Stevens--Wild World


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:iconsunnidaez:
Hi, I love the coloring in this photo. The bright red lock against the greys really works. To me this would symbolize that life has both a hard and absolute side (the lock) And a free spirited side (the feather).
Lighting: Great. No absurd shadows.
The lines of white are great, and somewhat frame your subject. Your use of thirds here is good and I can sense a balance in the photo.

The only part of this photo that I have difficulty with is the fact that the foreground cord/cable is out of focus. I find it distracting and pulling my eyes from the main subject. I see the background cable/cord is in focus, I think them impact would be greater if these were reversed.

All in all.. AWESOME shot!
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:iconmoisedy:
Frumoasa lucrarea... foarte expresiva! Cu ce aparat ai facut-o?

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:icona14onymus:
lucrez numai pe film,si aparatul preferat din dotare este un Zenit 11

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:bulletblack:"for I am all and I am no one.
I'm visible and yet unseen."
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:iconnorealname4me:
e cumva la intrarea in vilacrosse?

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Emancipate yourself from mental slavery.


ps. i :heart:. m&m's.
:iconmoisedy:
si, mai exact, ce film ai folosit? Cromatica e una de exceptie

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"The only thing that stops God from sending another flood is that the first one was useless." (Nicholas Chamfort)

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:icona14onymus:
nu,
este chiar vizavi de carturesti-ul de la romana:)

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:bulletblack:"for I am all and I am no one.
I'm visible and yet unseen."
:bulletblack:

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:icona14onymus:
scrie la fiece poza pe care o postez in descriere toate cele/este facuta cu niste inele de macro si este pe kodak color de 200:)

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I'm visible and yet unseen."
:bulletblack:

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:iconnorealname4me:
ah. :D

e unul si la intrarea in pasajul vilacrosse, dinspre banca.

--
Emancipate yourself from mental slavery.


ps. i :heart:. m&m's.
:icona14onymus:
am sa ma uit maine cand trec pe langa facultate daca e :)

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I'm visible and yet unseen."
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:iconiwe13009:
nice and simple concept but great...

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