I find shelter, in this way Under cover, hide away Can you hear, when I say? I have never felt this way
Maybe I had said, something that was wrong Can I make it better, with the lights turned on Maybe I had said, something that was wrong Can I make it better, with the lights turned on
Could I be, was I there? It felt so crystal in the air I still want to drown, whenever you leave Please teach me gently, how to breathe
And I'll cross oceans, like never before So you can feel the way I feel it too And I'll mirror images back at you So you can see the way I feel it too
Maybe I had said, something that was wrong Can I make it better, with the lights turned on Maybe I had said, something that was wrong Can I make it better, with the lights turned on
Maybe I had said, something that was wrong Can I make it better, with the lights turned on
The XX--Shelter
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this must have taken a lot of work because it is really good and i like the poem that you have with it but i dint really understand it very well but i do like it none the less i like how you have it in back and white it makes it more intriguing to the viewers eyes and i like the heart that you included on this it helps me understand it better along with the poem you included in your description; great photo! This critique was brought to you by the group:
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Wow... This is very inspiring, especially the poem you have there. It's about love right? A guy might have done something to hurt the girl, but he still loves her and wants to fix it i'm guessing. I love how the heart with wings turned out to be! Nice photo shot! How did you draw the heart, with a marker, or something else? How did you think of this? Did something inspire you or was it your own thought? This made me feel very sad, but in a good way because he wants to take back what he did. This is a guy right...? Excellent work!
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Nice photo shot!
How did you draw the heart, with a marker, or something else? How did you think of this?
Did something inspire you or was it your own thought?
This made me feel very sad, but in a good way because he wants to take back what he did.
This is a guy right...?
Excellent work!
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