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de fluture surd.

Made with:Zenit 11
Fuji film s u p e r i a 200

m a c r o__r i n g


:Full View Please:


"We're victims of sedition on the open sea.
No one ever said life was free.
Sink, swim, go down with the ship.
Just use your freedom of choice.

I'll say it again in the land of the free
Use your freedom of choice, freedom of choice.

In ancient Rome
there was a pawn
who followed along
and watched it fall
he cast a stone
he felt secure
he felt that he would never be heard.

Freedom of choice
it's what you've got
Freedom of choice

You're given a voice
you don't want it
seems to be the rule of thumb
don't be tricked by waht you see
you've got two ways to go

I'll say it again in the land of the free:
Use your freedom of choice, freedom of choice.

Freedom of choice
it's what you've got
Freedom of choice...

In ancient Rome
there was a pawn
who followed along
and watched it fall
he cast a stone
he felt secure
he felt that his voice would never be heard...
"


A Perfect Circle--Freedom Of Choice



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Critiques


:iconsunnidaez:
Let me first start by saying that the concept of this photo is beautiful, and the colours are amazing.
The background colours certainly set off the main subject.

Lighting: A bit on the bright side for me. The whites in the moth/butterfly appear burned out with loss of detail, the same with the flower,

Composition: The overall intent here is great, I love the Depth of field (though I have been told never to blurr the foreground) I still like it here. I feel there would have been a greater impact if you either.. (a) cut the flower off more drastically or (b) made sure the whole petal was in the photo. Snipping a tip of a petal make is appear as error and not intent.

The one tall dark stem in the background is distacting here also. It pulls my eyes away from the butterfly. The second, farther back one isn't as bad, but imagine how beautiful it would be if you could clone that out of there.

As for the frame... If you feel you must frame a photo, I think the frame colour should coordinate with the image. The white frame is distracting and drains colour from the image.

In conclusion, This is a very good image and one to be proud of most certainly. Thank you for sharing your lovely artwork.
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:iconmisantropia:
Great colors.
Lovely capture.

--
Living is easy
with eyes closed
:iconsiscanin:
Beautiful!

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my portfolio [link]
:iconm-o-s-e:
foarte frumoase culorile si incadrarea in cadru ... pacat de noise :(

oricum felicitari!
:icona14onymus:
noise:giggle:

da e pe film de aceea e vizibila si granulatia si noise-ul

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:bulletblack:"for I am all and I am no one.
I'm visible and yet unseen."
:bulletblack:

F o u n d e r and A d m i n on
=AnalogShots
:iconm-o-s-e:
a ... imi pare rau nu mi-am dat seama... nu prea sunt familiar cu aparatele pe film :(
:icona14onymus:
eu toata galeria o am pe film poti sa observi granulatie si noise pe foarte multe.:giggle:

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:bulletblack:"for I am all and I am no one.
I'm visible and yet unseen."
:bulletblack:

F o u n d e r and A d m i n on
=AnalogShots
:iconm-o-s-e:
da am vazut :) oricum foarte multe din pozele tale imi plac ...
bravo ! :)

ale mele sunt facute numai cu aparatul digital....
:icontpol:
that so beutifull .. colors.. wow I like it so much! :heart:

--
My eyes have seen you
Eyes have seen you
Let them photograph your soul...
The Doors

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