" Anywhere you sliver away Lost without a trace to trade I would expose you With all that’s askew
When you bring yourself to the ledge Look up on the gods you begged The shiver that runs you through It’s long overdue They’ve nothing left to do with you
Watch the halos burn out in disorder
It runs through you It burns through you Confesses for you "
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I like this photo, it has a nice interest in the fore-, mid and back-ground which leads you into the picture.
I like the way that you are lead into the haze centered around the middle and creates the mystery.
I would have liked a slightly sharper image on the fore/mid ground objects such as the tree - giving a sharper silhouette and contrast to the areas of light and dark.
The levels seems slightly flat, I wonder with slight levels adjustment more detail would have been shown.
Next time it might be fun doing a low iso, long exposure with a small aperture. Hopefully if the subject movement is not too great this will give a sharp image, with low noise and high dof.
I like the way that you are lead into the haze centered around the middle and creates the mystery.
I would have liked a slightly sharper image on the fore/mid ground objects such as the tree - giving a sharper silhouette and contrast to the areas of light and dark.
The levels seems slightly flat, I wonder with slight levels adjustment more detail would have been shown.
Next time it might be fun doing a low iso, long exposure with a small aperture. Hopefully if the subject movement is not too great this will give a sharp image, with low noise and high dof.
Nice picture
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